WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a story that has two parts: one using past tense and the other using present tense.

Which tense you begin in may dictate when the reader connects the dots between the two time frames.

Out Of All The Flowers, I Chose You

I never would’ve guessed what happened that day. I was kneeling outside the high school, taking pictures of the variety of flowers planted in the garden. I felt a hand on my shoulder. I looked up to see a beautiful girl that had been my age, blonde hair that shined with big, round emerald eyes. She asked to see the pictures, so I showed her. She complemented me and asked if she could pay me to take pictures of her. I took pictures of her, free of charge. Afterwards, she let me take her to the old burger place next to my neighborhood.

As my wife and I are looking through old photos, a photo falls on the ground. It is the photo from high school. Her and I are smiling. My job as a photographer wouldn’t have come this far if it weren’t for her. The brightest in the garden.

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