STORY STARTER

"I never thought I would have to PAY for this. How has it gotten to the point that people have to pay for this now?!"

Write a scene including this piece of speech - think about when your scene is occuring, and why it would be shocking to your character that they would have to pay for this item or service.

Breather

One cloudy morning, I made a one-way ticket to an odd city that was unknown to many, Oxtown. I walk into a futuristic building with lots of extraordinary symbols. I wonder what could this possibly mean. As I walk in, I see lots of people with machines. It’s those machines where people with breathing problems would need. There is not a single person without one. As soon as I walk pass a security, he rapidly pressed a great red button that had an odd symbol. When that button was pressed, a very loud alarm rang and guards furiously ran towards me.

“What the-“, I said in shock.

Next thing, you know I wake up in a hospital-like bed with cuffs on my legs and arms.

“What the hell is going!? What is this!?”

“Where do you come from” a doctor said.

“Why are you in our city without a Breather?!”, he furiously said with fright.

“What is a Breather? I don’t understand. What is going on here? I didn’t do anything !?” I said with shaking hands.

“Ah I see. You’re new to this town. Everyone who steps foot into this town must purchase a Breather. Without one, you will be persecuted.” The doctor said with a smirk.

“What!? What in the hell is a Breather?” I furiously questioned.

“Oxygen is not free, Ms. you must purchase an oxygen machine this instant or you will be sent away!”

I was in shock. How could this be true? You have to pay for air?? This is crazy.

I decided to head back home and never look back to this insane law of purchasing a Breather. I never understood why this was, but one day, I will return and discover the truth.

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