POEM STARTER
Write a poem which uses the scenario of being a fly on the wall.
To be a fly on the wall is to witness something private. Think of a situation in which this eavesdropping would be interesting, and write a poem based on your thoughts.
POEM STARTER
Write a poem which uses the scenario of being a fly on the wall.
To be a fly on the wall is to witness something private. Think of a situation in which this eavesdropping would be interesting, and write a poem based on your thoughts.
A fly with a heart of gold concerned about people in Afghanistan is original for sure! I love that the fly heard the news and felt compelled to action - a something that most people aren’t tempted to do.
“The fly had heard enough” is a great line and wonderful transition. Really, that whole stanza is good.
Feedback! You start the poem in one POV and end in another. “My eyes zoom” then later, “He was off…” Might help to either make everything “I, my, mine” or stick to third person. Another option is that the narrator is one fly witnessing another fly eavesdropping and ultimately following his heart. Might take a little finagling but it’s possible!
Great poem :)