WRITING OBSTACLE

Create a paragraph conjuring the intensity of love at first sight.

Use descriptive language like hyperbole and metaphors to convey the connection, and awe of this moment (whether or not you believe in such events)!

Who Was She?

Who was she? I felt like I’d just had a Marius-Cosette moment with this girl. I…couldn’t take my eyes off of her! Short in stature, wavy black curls, deep red lipstick, fair, cream-colored skin, a simple yet stunning black dress with a shimmering top—a Concert Choir Goddess. I caught myself staring, but if my breath was stole away just from looking at her, it was stole away even more when I realized…she was staring at me, too.

Those gorgeous, deep brown eyes glued to my face…commanding my every whit of attention…and…mesmerizing my very soul.

Who…who was she?

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