STORY STARTER
Submitted by Z
Write a scene where your protagonist betrays the side they’ve been on for years.
This 'side' could be an actual team or group, or an idea or arguement that the character has held for a long time.
STORY STARTER
Submitted by Z
Write a scene where your protagonist betrays the side they’ve been on for years.
This 'side' could be an actual team or group, or an idea or arguement that the character has held for a long time.
This was very intense, and I would love to know more of the story! I would recommend adding some more detail, either quips between the characters or narrator explaining the events, as I was not sure why these two characters were having conflict. I did like how your character incased the other character because it gives the reader a sense of their relationship.
Overall great job! Keep writing :D