WRITING OBSTACLE
Your protagonist receives life-changing news but can't verbally react.
Convey the emotional impact solely through the character's actions, expressions, and body language.
Coma
Life changing news we are going to kickstart your brain to wake you up
A twitch
blurry eyes,
hands to the heart
legs wobble with excitement
A smile
I shudder the fear
Breath calm breathing
Hair prickle
Feet wobble
Chest expand
Mummering in the Voice
Heart beat races
The beats of the machine rattles
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