WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a poem about the sea that does not use the words
Deep,
Blue,
Shimmering,
Cold.
Synonyms and creativity will help you find ways to convey the enormousness and beauty of the ocean without using these common descriptors.
You Offered Me The Ocean
You offered me the ocean
I took it gladly
For I loved its character
And its strength
I loved the waves
With their never ending curls
The cream white foam
Tipped against the tops
I loved the ocean
Its vicious yet calming temper
Slashing at the shore
Then retreating gingerly
I loved the feel of the water on my skin
The abrupt chill
Of the water
Weaving in between my toes
Soaking my feet with salty joy
I loved most when the ocean
Became savage
Pounding against the rocks
The turbulent gushes
The ocean is a charm
A brooch that I will treasure
You offered it to me
I took it gladly
I loved its strength
I loved its character
And now I thank you
For a life without the ocean
Would be a life without wonder.