WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a poem about the sea that does not use the words

Deep,

Blue,

Shimmering,

Cold.

Synonyms and creativity will help you find ways to convey the enormousness and beauty of the ocean without using these common descriptors.

You Offered Me The Ocean

You offered me the ocean

I took it gladly

For I loved its character

And its strength


I loved the waves

With their never ending curls

The cream white foam

Tipped against the tops


I loved the ocean

Its vicious yet calming temper

Slashing at the shore

Then retreating gingerly


I loved the feel of the water on my skin

The abrupt chill

Of the water

Weaving in between my toes

Soaking my feet with salty joy


I loved most when the ocean

Became savage

Pounding against the rocks

The turbulent gushes


The ocean is a charm

A brooch that I will treasure

You offered it to me

I took it gladly

I loved its strength

I loved its character

And now I thank you

For a life without the ocean

Would be a life without wonder.

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