WRITING OBSTACLE

Submitted by Maranda Quinn

Show a powerful emotion – love, grief, rage - in a quiet, everyday moment.

Instead of writing a dramatic and drawn out scene, think about how subtle actions and sensory details can carry the weight of the feeling.

Pronounced

fingers quivered at the touch

ice cold, the slightly darker shade


hovered over the other


spiked hair, meticulous, for this occasion


the other with newly painted nails, lovely and

emerald green


vice versa, who was over dressed.


the young man was beet red

sweat on the brow, the dirt washed from his fingertips


i could see her, her reflection in those very fingers

surmising what the difference was, what felt different, until that very moment


silence


The drop of nothing

and gibberish, and a Yes.

and a Yes.

And a Yes

A Yes

A Yes Yes YES




I looked at my coworker. A stain on their finger.

Red blemish


Oh the years I knew them. Oh the memories we shared.


That very table


We were pronounced too.


Now they serve and smile

Serve and smile
































































































We meet, together, at the abyss here.

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