i wrote this in 10 min, this is unfilrered writing with no editing done with it. pure emotion and heart was put into this, lmk what yall think

at just her first glance, she fell in love him „what will we become?“ she asked looking deep in his eyes she found a glimpse does she really want his thousand-yard stare? yet she danced with him and held him close thinking, „when is he going to hit“ when will we get close enough to get on each other’s nerves when will he get close enough to hit when will i get close enough to heal his insecurities

at just their first glance, her girls hated him „he will be like the others“ they said looking deep in his eyes they found a glimpse she doesnt need another 6‘ man whore they watched them fight and take breaks and wondered „when will she awake“ when will they break it off with one another when will he get too abusive for her to not remember when will she be found in the paper

at just his first glance, he saw his ex. „when will she realize?“ he thought looking deep in her eyes he found a glimpse does he really want the woman for distraction? yet he danced with her and held her close thinking „when will I be back?“ when will we get back together when will she get all her things and leave when will I get the woman of my dreams