STORY STARTER
Write a scene where a character confesses their (unreturned) love for another.
STORY STARTER
Write a scene where a character confesses their (unreturned) love for another.
Ouch that icy shut down! I felt that. Your word choice was stellar on several points “sour feeling in her stomach” “eyes pinched shut” “twisted her hands”.
Some feedback: setting. It might help to establish setting earlier in your piece. By line 3, this story would super benefit. Maybe weave in some setting while she’s thinking about the prince. Allow her emotions to go hand in hand with what’s around her. That way you not only show us where you are (and so aid with the visuals) but you also enhance her emotions.
Those dang mean boys! Lol, I felt the need to address them ☺️ Great writing!