STORY STARTER
Write a horror story that takes place at a birthday party.
Help the co-founder of Daily Prompt celebrate his birthday today, by writing in his favourite genre!
STORY STARTER
Write a horror story that takes place at a birthday party.
Help the co-founder of Daily Prompt celebrate his birthday today, by writing in his favourite genre!
I can see how much you’ve improved even from the last story I read of yours, great work. You brought me more into the story by describing the flavour of the cupcake, showing me what the candle light reveals.
There’s still a couple bits to think about, for example, you could describe how the wind clawed aggressively against the cabin rather than just saying the storm was more aggressive.
This is me personally but I don’t like it when people write sounds, like creak or smash, as I would, again, prefer to be shown it through the story.
You’re improving and it’s great to see. Looking forward to what else you do.
#keepwriting