WRITING OBSTACLE
Crackle. Pond. Night.
Write a description of a person or creature inspired by these three words. You may be as fantastical or realistic as you like. The words may inspire the description, or be used within it.
WRITING OBSTACLE
Crackle. Pond. Night.
Write a description of a person or creature inspired by these three words. You may be as fantastical or realistic as you like. The words may inspire the description, or be used within it.
I really liked it, you did so well with the description of the pond! (Also how did you make the word “still” italic?)
I just want to thank you very much for being such a reader of my work! Your pieces are amazing as well and I wish you a STUPENDOUS day!
Lovely job! Sounds like a part of a great read! You did well to end on a hook - easier said than done so bravo! My only edit would be to see if you could be a bit more concise. You have awesome descriptors but you often say the same thing in two different ways. Your work might flow better if you pair down some of that language. I really like what you have going here!
This is awesome! It was definitely a tiny bit hard to follow but i loved it!!!!!