STORY STARTER
Write a story about a world where dreams and reality are intertwined.
How does this world work, and what does it allow people to do?
STORY STARTER
Write a story about a world where dreams and reality are intertwined.
How does this world work, and what does it allow people to do?
Well done. Nice use of a timelock to build tension.
My only thought would be to maybe add a little twist at the end. Maybe the protagonist thinks all is fine, but realizes there was some lingering effect carried through. (Soreness, bone break, etc). Something to signify that all growth comes with scars.
Nice work.
The plot of this was great, makes me wonder of the world these characters grew up in. Great job <3
This was great! I especially like the images of the character falling and your mom dreaming up the fanciful creatures.