COMPETITION PROMPT
Write a story set in a hospital.
Heartbeat Echoes
The hospital was a maze of sterile hallways and hushed conversations. Dr. Naomi Carter had seen her share of trauma, but nothing prepared her for the case of Lillian, a fourteen-year-old girl who had been in a coma for three years.
Lillian’s parents visited her every day, their hope dwindling but never completely gone. Recently, however, Lillian’s EEG readings had started to show signs of irregular activity, signs that her brain was fighting its way back to consciousness.
Naomi found herself drawn to Lillian’s case, spending late nights pouring over her charts, searching for something everyone else missed. It wasn’t just professional duty; it was personal. Naomi’s younger brother had been in a similar state years ago, and she had failed to save him. This felt like a second chance.
One night, as she sat by Lillian’s bedside, exhaustion blurring her vision, she spoke softly, confessing her guilt and regrets. The words were meant for herself, a release she didn’t expect anyone to hear.
But then, Lillian’s fingers twitched.
The next morning, Naomi ran tests with new hope. As days turned into weeks, Lillian’s movements became more frequent, her eyes fluttering beneath closed lids. The hospital staff called it a miracle. Naomi called it redemption.
But Lillian’s awakening wasn’t just a medical triumph. As she slowly regained consciousness, she spoke of dreams, vivid, haunting dreams of voices calling to her, of someone pleading with her to return. And those voices? One of them sounded like Naomi.
The bond between doctor and patient grew stronger as Lillian’s health improved. Naomi wasn’t just healing Lillian’s body. She was healing herself.