Banished
Banished. Dismissed and forgotten.
Crime against humanity. Sick and twisted.
No trial, no jury, no judge.
The wilderness or the noose.
The choice was made.
Alone for eternity.
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Banished. Dismissed and forgotten.
Crime against humanity. Sick and twisted.
No trial, no jury, no judge.
The wilderness or the noose.
The choice was made.
Alone for eternity.
EPIC. The shortness drove home the finality of the story, and the fate of the main character. While I want to know more, you delivered the right amount and just let the piece drive home endless possibilities.
I really liked how thought provoking this was, you painted a scene so well and really gave me Mad Max vibes haha.
I agree with Sally and HM! This is short yet also tells quite a story in those words.
Great job at getting it done despite your busy day yesterday:)
I thought this was great. It got a whole story over so well.
It makes me think of a lawless place like mad max thunder dome. Where it’s trial by anyone who’s there for anything that gets annoying.
I think I would’ve taken the noose but then I’m a people person.
This is very atmospheric and let me see a world beyond the words.
It was wonderful as it let me in to another world. Well done.
You poet, you! I say this is a wonderful poem 🥳 The lines grow ever shorter, ever more quiet, just like wilderness.
