STORY STARTER
“Every night I wake up under the same crooked tree.”
Write a horror story that specifically centres around this piece of speech.
STORY STARTER
“Every night I wake up under the same crooked tree.”
Write a horror story that specifically centres around this piece of speech.
Fantastic.
Setting: it’s difficult to convey setting with only a few paragraphs but you nailed it. “Its warped appendages corrupting the space around me…” is an excellent sentence. (Note: should be “Its” not “It’s,” I believe.)
C&O: again, nailed it. Found a combination of Sleepy Hollow and Evil Dead in just a few short sentences.
Voice: this story has to be told on first person, so good choice. I like the way the narrator balances prose and poetry.
Nice use of limited formatting choices to accentuate the “waking” portion, as well.
Well done.
Eerie!! Excellent setting writing - really felt like I could visualize what you’d described! 🤩 And that ending truly gave me pause.
It's very creative! Excellent vocabulary, though you could use a bit more plot within it. I can picture it very vividly, you did marvelously