POEM STARTER
Write a Crybin based on something you have experienced in the last week.
A Crybin is a variation of an Italian sonnet, with the rhyme structure ABBA CDDC EFG EFG.
I Felled A Tree 🌲
I felled a tree
She was dead and broken
Her spirit had been woken
Now, she’s free
She fell to the ground
Onto the grass
Her beauty could never last
Down with the crack of a sound
She needed to go
Her life was cherished and loved
She won’t be forgotten
She disappeared with the ebb and flow
Her soul to soar freely above
Escaping as the world goes rotten
Beautiful! I love the juxtaposition or breaking/falling with freedom and beauty 😃
Perhaps the description ‘the crack of a sound’ could be ‘with a cracking sound’?
‘A sound’ itself doesn’t really mean anything!
Chills! This was a great read!
Thank you, that means a lot😃
