Brilliant first piece, Ella! I love the line: “the repetition of “unseen, unseeable” and “unheard, unhearable” - very powerful.
It would have been cool to expand on the idea and see it in more detail. I look forward to reading more of your pieces :)
I love your imagery and the words that you use. They flow well together and sound pleasant together! Great work! Keep writing ✍️
