WRITING OBSTACLE

Submitted by Lola

Create a descriptive passage or poem depicting the very first moments of a crush forming.

First Crush.

_What is this emotion,_

_This sudden feeling of warmth?_

_This rush coursing through me,_

_Why did it appear when she passed?_


_Why are my cheeks burning like a stovetop,_

_And rosy like a ladybug’s back?_

_Why is my heart thumping foribly,_

_Like it’s trying to escape my chest to greet her?_


_Why do my hands feel doused,_

_Like I put them out the window during rainfall?_

_What is this unnatural timidity,_

_That has picked at the petals of my emotions?_


_I don’t know a thing about her,_

_But I focus my eyes on her like I want to,_

_She looks so remarkable, delightful, sweet..._

_Oh, I’ve never felt like this before!_


_God, my body is betraying me,_

_Trying to make me look moronic!_

_I need to stay calm-_

_Why can’t I stay calm?!_

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(I’m reposting this to make this show up as a new poem, so I’m sorry for deleting your like, Invisible Poetry 😭)

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