WRITING OBSTACLE

You can feel someone watching you, but you can't see them anywhere.

Describe this feeling in less than 500 words, using vivid and visceral language to make your reader connect with the character being watched.

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Horror

Poetry

I feel you on my back

I feel your sharp talon like nails on my back

I feel your sharp talon like nails clawing on my back

I feel your sharp talon like nails clawing on my back while you stare

I feel your sharp talon like nails clawing on my back while you stare with menacing red eyes

I feel your sharp talon like nails clawing on my back while you stare with menacing red eyes that burn holes in the back of my head

I feel your sharp talon like nails clawing on my back while you stare with menacing red eyes that burn holes in the back of my head.

I feel your sharp talon like nails clawing on my back while you stare with menacing red eyes that burn holes in the back of my head. They feel like gunshots, fresh and still bleeding

I feel your sharp talon like nails clawing on my back while you stare with menacing red eyes that burn holes in the back of my head. They feel like gunshots, fresh and still bleeding. But can I see you?

I feel your talon like nails clawing on my back while you stare with menacing red eyes that burn holes in the back of my head. They feel like gunshots, fresh and still bleeding. But can I see you?

I feel your nails clawing on my back while you stare with menacing red eyes that burn holes in the back of my head. They feel like gunshots, fresh and still bleeding. But can I see you?

I feel you clawing on my back while you stare with menacing red eyes that burn holes in the back of my head. They feel like gunshots, fresh and still bleeding. But can I see you?

I feel you on my back while you stare with menacing red eyes that burn holes in the back of my head. They feel like gunshots, fresh and still bleeding. But can I see you?

I feel you stare with menacing red eyes that burn holes in the back of my head. They feel like gunshots, fresh and still bleeding. But can I see you?

I feel you stare with menacing eyes that burn holes in the back of my head. They feel like gunshots, fresh and still bleeding. But can I see you?

I feel you stare with eyes that burn holes in the back of my head. They feel like gunshots, fresh and still bleeding. But can I see you?

I feel you burn holes in the back of my head. They feel like gunshots, fresh and still bleeding. But can I see you?

I feel you in the back of my head. They feel like gunshots, fresh and still bleeding. But can I see you?

I feel you fresh and still bleeding. But can I see you?

I feel you, but can I see you?

But can I see you?

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Gabs

still spiraling... [any pronouns]