STORY STARTER

Submitted by amber35.xx

When you died you were meant to turn up at heaven’s gates, but instead you arrived at the gates of hell. You have to stay until things are set right, but you are starting to enjoy it in hell...

Downstairs

“This can’t be right.” I say with a panic. One moment I’m walking along the street in New York, minding my own business, and the next I’m who knows where. Standing under a massive gate that’s literally on fire.


I heard the car speeding down the street, but I had a green light. He hit me. Or he must of, because clearly this is some sort of after life. Clearly, I’m dead.


“Hell makes no mistakes.” The guard, a demon, I presume, has a bright red face and eyes blacker than night. He wears a bored expression. I’m sure everyone who makes it Downstairs says the same thing.


“You don’t understand, I did everything right! I’ve never missed a day of school or work in my life, met my deadlines, hugged my grandma.” I ramble on for another minute before he stops me.


“What did you say your name was?” He looks back to his clipboard, searching through a list of names.


“Claire Travis. Claire Elizabeth Travis.”


The demon scans his clipboard again, searching for who knows what. He reviews it for several minutes, not saying a word.


I’m stuck listening to the agonizing screams coming from beyond the gate. Like a nonstop symphony of pain and suffering. This has got to be a mistake. I’m not meant for Hell!


Finally, the demon looks up from his clipboard. He scans me up and down.


“Come with me.” He turns and motions for me to follow. I have to jog to keep up.


We walk down a narrow path shrouded by skeletal trees. The thick dog makes a dense wall on all sides. I can’t see more than ten feet ahead of me.


“Where are we going?” I say, breathless from our quick pace.


“Hell’s Palace.” He says gruffly. “It seems there’s been a mistake.”




…. To be continued

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