VISUAL PROMPT
by Sans @ deviantart.com/Sanskarans

Write a story titled "When I Look in the Mirror".
VISUAL PROMPT
by Sans @ deviantart.com/Sanskarans
Write a story titled "When I Look in the Mirror".
Oh my yes. That was good. I really enjoyed reading this, especially the description of both the monster and the girl. The only constructive feedback I have for it is that new paragraphs would be helpful. I used to want to just write and write and write, never spacing anything out. It’s fun to do, but not very fun to read. It can get confusing for the readers. Some advice: when you start a new idea or description, start a new paragraph. Directly before someone speaks, start a new paragraph, even if the dialogue isn’t included. This story overall was very good and I really enjoyed reading it!