STORY STARTER
You are stuck in a room with a pyschopath who wants to kill you. You have 5 minutes to convince them otherwise.
Write a short speech to convince this desolate individual to spare your life.
STORY STARTER
You are stuck in a room with a pyschopath who wants to kill you. You have 5 minutes to convince them otherwise.
Write a short speech to convince this desolate individual to spare your life.
Thank you sooo much I will make sure to try and incorporate this into future writings. Thank you again.
This is amazing! Although, you could use some more detail! Try to show, not tell.
An example of show not tell is:
Tell: “Anna was sad when her father died”
Show: “Tears swelled and rolled from her eyes. She couldn’t breathe from the weight of sadness sitting on her chest. The world disappeared for a moment and she realized she was truly alone.”
A trick to show and not tell is: show HOW they are doing something, not just tell them straight up. Readers love to imagine things by themselves, and it also makes the book longer!
I am open to criticisms and advice. Any and all criticism is good criticism. Thank you 😊