STORY STARTER
You get a text message from an unknown number, accusing you of standing them up. Curious, you respond.
Be creative with this prompt, and think about how you can drive a narrative around this medium of communication.
STORY STARTER
You get a text message from an unknown number, accusing you of standing them up. Curious, you respond.
Be creative with this prompt, and think about how you can drive a narrative around this medium of communication.
I loved this, though did a really good job at building up the characters, I loved all of it. The flow of the story it really well done. You did a good job at making us think that it was the wrong number i n the beginning a slowly mounting the fear! Amazing loved it!!
i love this! the way you built up the story from us thinking that it was truly a wrong number to a whole stalker/killer situation is very natural even though you did it in such minimal wording. the dialogue sounds super natural too. my only advice is to bulk up your story with text that isn’t dialogue, if that makes any sense, try adding dialogue tags, descriptive paragraphs, more context into the situation. have it build up more so that the reader learns more about the character so that we actually care about her death. i really love this and i hope my advice (however probably useless because of the word limit) helps in the future! <3