WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a story where all the dialogue takes place through telepathy.

You don't only have to write dialogue, but consider how telepathy would affect the incorporation of action, tone, and development of your story.

Will

[Don’t be afraid.]

I stop dead in my tracks and look around. What was that? All around me is nothing but trees and the forest. I hear forest creatures all around me, moving about and doing their own thing, but that’s it.

After a moment I move on. It’s a peaceful day, a wonderful day. I’m heading to my cabin for the weekend to reflect, unwind from the week, and maybe do some writing.

I am almost to the first trailhead that I turn off of to head to my place when the same voice from before comes again. [Don’t be afraid, Jason.] I look around, wildly spinning around in place. No one is there. I open my mouth to tell off whatever teenager is playing mind games when the voice calls out again. [Please, don’t. They’ll hear you.]

I close my mouth. What is going on? The voice answers again. [I am behind you and to your left. I can help as much as I can, but you have to trust me. Don’t speak out loud, I can hear your thoughts.]

I nod my head, understanding but not fully comprehending. [Who is ‘they’? And who are you?] I ask. I’m very aware of where I am at the moment, so I begin moving.

[They are coming for me, and they won’t stop until they have me,] the voice answers. [My name is Will. Jason, we have to get to your cabin. Is it far?]

Immediately I get bits of memory and mental images of my cabin. Once I turn on this trail it’s only half a mile deeper into the forest. It occurs to me that Will should not know all of this about me, let alone know my name, when a single word flashes across my mind. Telepathy. [You can read minds?] I ask.

[…Yes.] the voice answers. Even if it’s not aloud, I can feel the sarcasm in that simple yes. [We need to move, Jason.] Of course.

I turn off the main trail and start to make my way to the cabin. The voice doesn’t speak again until the cabin comes into view.

[Excellent, Jason. Get inside, Quickly. They are almost upon us.]

I half walk, half run to the front door, unlock it, and walk inside. I turn around, expecting to see someone behind me, but there is no one. [Are you sure this is not some trick my mind is playing on me? How do I know this is real?] I ask, suddenly feeling very foolish.

[Look outside,] the voice replies. I obey, and I look out the window. Outside are three… men? They look like men, they look human, but something is off about them. I duck down below the window and watch them. They stop about fifty feet from the cabin, fanned out. All three are staring intently at the door. [They followed you here, have been trailing you since you got out of your car.] I inhale and exhale panic starting to rise.

[Don’t be afraid,] the voice says. Then I feel a hand gently grab my shoulder. I look up into Will’s eyes. [Are you ready?]

I nod, and three loud knocks split the silence.

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