POEM STARTER

‘All in a golden afternoon, under the skies of cloudless blue.’

Write a poem that begins or ends with this line, adapted from Alice in Wonderland. Don’t feel limited to the themes and images of the book – see where else you could go from these words.

Under The Skies

Poetry

YA fiction

I loved his eyes they were a golden brown they were beautiful he looks at me with his beautiful eyes “it’s over I don’t love you anymore” he says I look at him with confusion but leave his house I see golden brown everywhere fuck I even had a golden brown bracelet just because it reminded me of him all in a golden afternoon my day was ruined I look in the mirror and see my blue eyes it reminds me of the sky the beautiful sky all in a golden afternoon, under the sky’s of cloudless blue

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Kayla

Hello I’m a young poet and would love to read any and all feedback!