WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a scene of no more than 100 words that utilises the following descriptive words:
uneven,
epic,
lost.
Uneven Terrain
I stand upon bones and blood
scraps of flesh,
covering some bodies unevenly
and leaving others without any
at all.
I stand upon a hill,
that speaks to me in a language of
bitterness and violence,
a epic that shouldn’t be uttered
to the wind.
I stand upon the lives,
waiting still,
for some release,
clasping
hope tightly.
They will
remain lost,
strewn
among this
wasteland front,
still battling for glory,
something they won’t find here.
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feedback por favor merci
The way you start each stanza with ‘I stand’ is cool. Themes of war and death are always good and poetic, I can really feel the loss and death and such in this poem. I feel like the word epic is a little out of place but you do what you have to do for the prompt, you know what I mean