WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a scene of no more than 100 words that utilises the following descriptive words:

uneven,

epic,

lost.

Uneven Terrain

I stand upon bones and blood

scraps of flesh,

covering some bodies unevenly

and leaving others without any

at all.


I stand upon a hill,

that speaks to me in a language of

bitterness and violence,

a epic that shouldn’t be uttered

to the wind.


I stand upon the lives,

waiting still,

for some release,

clasping

hope tightly.


They will

remain lost,

strewn

among this

wasteland front,

still battling for glory,

something they won’t find here.


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Comments 1

The way you start each stanza with ‘I stand’ is cool. Themes of war and death are always good and poetic, I can really feel the loss and death and such in this poem. I feel like the word epic is a little out of place but you do what you have to do for the prompt, you know what I mean