In reading this captivating poem, I did so appreciate the fluidity within. All the while, the author managed to maintain the snowball effect, as prompted. The word choice was flawless and I did rather enjoy the open ending, leaving the readers to interpret for themselves. By not quiet specifying what it is our perspective did to said “him” it creates a sense of openness in which the reader can make his or her own conclusions as to what the perspective is feeling guilty about. All in all, I relished reading this poem and hereby encourage others to do the same.

[this is kind of hard for me to fluff up my own work, but I’m just trying to keep my streak alive! 😊]