WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe the most beautiful person you know in one sentence.

Your sentence can have multiple clauses, but must still make grammatical sense. Consider that beauty is not just physical.

The Dreamer

She is the loudest when she is silent, her pensive eyes staring into a daydream unreachable to the rest of humankind.

Comments 2

Emma LEVY

4 months ago

This is a lovely description that hints at the inner world of the character! I love it! 😍 Perhaps you could explore the specific nature of her daydreams, and describe how they contrast with her outward demeanor. This could add depth to her character and enhance the emotional impact of her silence. I like to characterize thought personally by saying “the wings of her brows pinched slightly” but that’s just me and you don’t have to use it! I really love this piece!🥰

Rosaline

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