WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a description of the feeling of drifting off to sleep.

You could use metaphorical or poetic language, or you could use comparisons and contrast to describe this feeling.

Drifting

I try hard to stay conscious. My eyelids fight to close. My body breathes slowly and I can feel myself letting go of the world around me. Darkness starts swallowing me and I can barely see. Finally I dive into the darkness and rest.

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