WRITING OBSTACLE
Crackle. Pond. Night.
Write a description of a person or creature inspired by these three words. You may be as fantastical or realistic as you like. The words may inspire the description, or be used within it.
WRITING OBSTACLE
Crackle. Pond. Night.
Write a description of a person or creature inspired by these three words. You may be as fantastical or realistic as you like. The words may inspire the description, or be used within it.
Wow this is really cool! I wasn’t entirely sure what was going on but I think that was maybe the point. Leaves a lot to the imagination!
There is a lot of description of the setting and what the character is doing, but not many clues as to who she is or how she feels about this horrible place she’s found herself in. Things like laying down with the insects are a a good way to reveal the pain she’s been through, but still don’t really tell us about her emotions. The same with the detail about wanting to be clean for her mother, it tells us a nice character trait about her but not really how she feels. There were definitely lots of great situations and settings here which could have been a good backdrop to some emotion from the character, otherwise I kinda struggled to really care about her? 😆