WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a description of the feeling of drifting off to sleep.

You could use metaphorical or poetic language, or you could use comparisons and contrast to describe this feeling.

Sleep 😴

I put down my book

My eyelids are closing

Give my alarm clock a look

It’s 10:16.

I’m tired

So tired

I pull up my blanket

And let the dreams start…

(This is a short, not that good poem but I’m kinda tired and don’t feel like writing a lot! So have a great day!✌️)

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🌄 France Hillson 🌄

3 years ago

I feel you! Sometimes I go to bed at 11 and wake up at four, don't fall back asleep until 530 and then wake up at 630. On a school night. Not often a regular school night, a big test night. "I pull up the blanket and let the dreams start", possibly the best thing ever! Lol

Nathalie Core

3 years ago

I disagree with you. I quite like it. Short or not, tgere definitely is something to it ! ;)

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