POEM STARTER
Write a poem under the theme of ‘Last Chance’.
What subject might a poem with this theme explore?
POEM STARTER
Write a poem under the theme of ‘Last Chance’.
What subject might a poem with this theme explore?
Heartbreaking and lovely.
This is so heart achingly beautiful!
I like the pace of this poem. And the theme of the poem is also touching. Well done.
Areas of improvement, I would have to say that I would have enjoyed it a lot more if at each third line rhyme with the next third line. That would have been awesome. And finally, I would try not use the same words, such as “fading” so close to each other. Or use a similar word such as: “my chance is diminishing”.