POEM STARTER

Submitted by SwimTS15

Write a poem or a short story from the perspective of someone on the one year anniversary of a loved ones’ death.

Unheard Sounds

It’s been 365 days

Of missing you


Of tears gathering

In crowds

Running down my cheeks

And silence

Pulsating in my ears


Time passes

And memories of you

No longer build

Coalescing

The way they once did


When you were here

We’d oscilate between bickering

And getting along


Between irritation

And comraderie

All the time

Love the underlying element


I felt your absence most

When the cherry blossoms bloomed


I half expected

Your raucous whooping

and senseless hollering

As I passaged beneath the trees


But all spring

The only sounds

Were the dawn chorus


And children laughing

And that hollow lungs heaving sound

That often traverses my lips now

There was no keening whoop


In the absence of your loudness

I felt regret

How had indulged in embarassment

How had i been so unaware

What a gift your loud shrieks had been


It’s been twelve months since i heard

That high pitched

grating noise

And I miss it


Like I miss you

Comments 1

I love the idea that once someone is gone you start to appreciate things about them that you didn’t like so much before, and the words you used like coalescing and raucous were well placed, great poem