WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a story where the protagonist only says the same ten words but can rearrange them differently.
Think carefully about the selection of these ten words and what the protagonist may be able to articulate with them.
A Nightmare Of War
“The city is buried, deep, hot, she burns so bright!” Stella shouts from her sleep, thrashing around amongst her blankets.
I rush over to her bedside and try to wake her, shaking her with such a delicate force. To no avail she is still stuck in her nightmare, sweat drenching her body. I pull her into my arms and try consoling her through her unconsciousness.
“Baby, baby, you are okay! Shhh! You are okay! Mamas here.” I say, stroking her jet black hair. I hold back tears and try to fight the urge to slap her awake.
“She is buried deep..the bright city burns so hot..” she mumbles as her eyes finally flutter open. I take mental note of the words she keeps repeating and rock her back and forth in my lap. My chest feeling as if a brick fell on it.
The doctor said she would eventually forget. Well at least most of the details. But here she is, stuck in a never ending hell, a constant loop of memories of how she almost died and I can’t take any of the pain away. I can’t save my baby from her traumatizing past and I feel so defeated.