POEM STARTER
Write a poem about the importance of hands in a relationship.
Think about the different types of relationship you could relate this to.
POEM STARTER
Write a poem about the importance of hands in a relationship.
Think about the different types of relationship you could relate this to.
This is very sweet and relatable to me.
I like structured poems with a set rhyme scheme (just preference) so I liked the 4 line per stanza AABB you choose. It is simple and beautiful, much like the poem you wrote. The longer lines also gave it a nice pace and flow. Sometimes people use short choppy lines that, to me, don’t really match the theme of “love and beauty” so well done there.
The ONLY suggestion I can make for improvement really is that you reused the word “embrace” for the rhyme in two lines. While this isn’t bad, and can be thought of as repetition to reinforce how important “his embrace” is to you, it seemed more like an unintentional thing. I’ll just say that with so many wonderful words to choose from, you can mix it up and not repeats rhyming words (which tend to be the most noticed/emphasized in poems like this).
However, my one suggestion is more of a stylistic/preference thing and is VERY minor. Overall I loved this poem.