WRITING OBSTACLE
Choose an inanimate object. Describe it to your readers as though it is a living being.
Consider the progression of this story, and whether you will reveal to your readers the true nature of the item you chose. Build suspense and curiosity.
SAVE ME
He began to spin in circles__then become fixated,he spine’s round and round again, no straight thinking in feelings that his whole wide world was moving,it spines and sometimes a feeling as if nothing moving at the moment at all. He felt helplessness down there, next to his pillows——like four of them. Waking up one morning he muttered out loudly “ the day I see you! whom holds me down,down when I’m out of my self,I will end you sooner than your execution in spirit before flesh“ .
Enacting strong surge for body control… that end’s up with an ineffective approach to the matter at hand(moving the body!). Eyes opened to fathom his head aches__ the pains where about seven legions, all the surroundings about his head felt sickening. Acting like a person downstairs with fever,he knows it was a dream because he was just right the in the bed sleeping.
(He had to see two doctors: one of home land, the other westerners… he ended up it was just a fever! Not the high one).