WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a description of being caught in a thunderstorm without using the words:
Above
Cold
Fall/fell
Down
Focus on all aspects of the situation – the physical sensations, the appearance of the sky and landscape, and potentially the mood of the narrator as part of this.
Caught
It was useless. They would never make it back in time.
The ground beneath shook from the strength of the funnel chasing them.
“Don’t look back,” Oliver screamed.
He was plunging forward. The pelting gusts are whipping. His body propels us forward. The lightning lit the way. The path turned muddy from the sudden melting ice, increasing the difficulty of reaching the cave.
With one last push, we stumbled into the darkness. Wet and trembling.
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