WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a poem about the sea that does not use the words
Deep,
Blue,
Shimmering,
Cold.
Synonyms and creativity will help you find ways to convey the enormousness and beauty of the ocean without using these common descriptors.
The Ocean’s Melody
As I walk along the promenade…
I stop for a moment…
I look out…
And see the ocean view…
I gaze at it for a while…
Taking in the view…
One of the best I’ve seen in a while…
Of the glistening ocean next to me…
I close my eyes…
And I hear, a song..?
I turn to where I hear it…
But there is nothing but the ocean in my stead…
That’s when I realize…
It’s not someone playing a song…
Someone singing or humming a song…
It was coming from the ocean…
From that moment onward….
I was able to hear it….
The ocean’s melody….
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