WRITING OBSTACLE
Depict a scene set on the beach of a world orbited by two moons.
Rather than directly describing this scene, try to 'show' the world that it is set in by adding unique elements to the story or characters.
TWO MOONS
I went to bed late, hoping for the night to become longer. My alarms beep with a loud noise. Still feeling sleepy, I was finding it difficult to open my eyes. I still want to be in bed with my sheet all over my body. I knew It's time I wake up. With my eyes opening groggily to see a bright light illuminating.
I cover my eyes with my hands, I get up to see I am no longer in a room but a sandy beach with two moons hanging above my head. With my heart thumping faster than before. I knew something was wrong. I close my eyes and open it again, this time I can a see a strong tide coming my way, if I don't stand up the ocean is going to take me away with it.
I ran as far my legs could carry me, breathing heavily. Why am I here? How do I go back. I stared at the moon. Since when did earth have two moons at the same time? I questioned myself. The sand felt so cold underneath my feet. Waiting for a miracle to happen, people were filling up the beach. A family of three were playing with a ball.
A couple were kissing behind me. I walked up to a man to inquire what these place was, He didn't respond, he walked pass me. It dawned on me that no one can see me.