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A high school student is mistakenly credited for a heroic act they didn't perform.
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STORY STARTER
A high school student is mistakenly credited for a heroic act they didn't perform.
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Wow I really like this poem, I was initially drawn in because I related to Eliza and am currently going through a phase where I think I’m right on the brink of turning from a straight A student to burnout, I like the detail you added about the color of Billy Jean’s eyes, it helped to bring his character to life and make the reader feel bad for the kid who probably could have used a good mark on his record. The thing I most like is, though, that the way you’ve written it prompts the reader to think about what decision they’d make in Eliza’s shoes, and the scary part is, I think I’d do just the same thing, overall such a great story, I was entranced from the first line :)