WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a description of a seaside setting, focusing strongly on the sense of smell.
Not just the salty sea; what else might evoke the sense of smell here?
WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a description of a seaside setting, focusing strongly on the sense of smell.
Not just the salty sea; what else might evoke the sense of smell here?
I loved this sensory journey of emotions. Thank you😌
So much about this piece is clean and lovely. You really are a great writer :) My favorite bit is “…she closed her eyes and tried to let the sea cleanse her…” That word “tried” is just…well it’s just wonderful! So much of this story seems to anchor on that word. Excellent placement.
Sentence length varies wonderfully. The imagery comes through. You’ve involved all the senses. Nice!
My only bit of feedback is to strengthen the word “creepy.” It doesn’t feel like it matches the other types of words you’ve been using. Maybe ominous? Eerie?
This really is great! So glad I read this!