WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a short description or poem about a song that you love, without incorporating any of the major lyrics.

Consider what it is about the song that you enjoy – the mood, the message – and aim to convey it without using lyrics that will identify it.

Seventy Thorns

Song: Seventy Thorns by Kim Dracula



You left me in the corner of your eye,

Words I desperately long to say

To the one I loved and lost,

The one that hurts me to this day.


I want to be the one that cares,

Words I told him so many times

But he prayed to god,

Prayed that I would suffer.


Stick your middle fingers up

And flip them to god.


His prayer came true,

And that’s when I knew

I would be forever condemned to

A life without him.


A crown of seventy thorns

Placed upon my now torn

Mind

As my world was set aflame.


I want to be the one who hurts you,

He would say,

Because no roses ever come without thorns.

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