COMPETITION PROMPT
Write a poem in ‘revorto’ form.
A reverto poem uses couplets that alternate between one highly poetic and one very unpoetic line. The form is meant to jar the reader from a sense of poetic beauty to something other.
Rot And Bury
_Autumn’s breath weaves chill from spine _
I found a dead body in the woods.
_Its scent bleeds forth from molded ground _
Her skin was white, she wore a frown.
_Whence fox feet trailed a buried line _
Her body lay bare, lips soiled with grime.
_Through brush recoiled where once bound. _
Clothed in my shadow, uttered no sound.
_Hangs from branches like withered bats _
In teeth, they found her name at last.
_Birch bark’s paper fingers linger _
Arrow birthmark on her finger.
_Creek stones cling to moss-made hats _
And so unveiled a ‘scandalous’ past.
_Chapparal’s crown reduced to tinder _
A prostitute, downtown club singer.
_Wildflowers stripped to a skeleton frame _
She was on the news for only one day.
_Whiskered petals scratch and skitter _
Then was burned to skull and cinder.
_Songbird’s spirit — fallen lame _
Swept beneath a shallow grave.
_Draped their feathered flesh, grown bitter _
Left her to lie, no care for her killer.
_Pond grows dark neath rings of ice _
I’d sit beside her stone, at times.
_Leaves grow paler, drift to snow_
And watch the lanterns’ fading glow.
_Milked from moon, a clean-cut slice _
Shed a flower; mourner’s guise.
_Swallows earth and spits the crow _
First to rot and last to grow.
_Then is silent, cloaked in white _
Name forgottend, out of sight.
_Shadow’s stomach; last light’s weep _
No one listens, no one speaks.
_Eyes fall prey to winter’s blight _
Died in death, and lived by night.
_And sink to drown; eternal sleep._
But I’ll remember: Kaitlyn Lee.
Wow, fantastic!
This was very moving! I enjoyed the format and how I could read the italics and regular words as separate poems or together. You really hit the mark!
I just got to this site - liking it - love this work. Glad you won! Totally deserved
I love this poem, it is very well written
This is really good