This is part one, it does not fit this prompt at all, lol! It’s an assignment for my sophomore english, please give me harsh criticism, thank you!

“We’re here!” Olivia exclaimed, exhausted from the arduous flight.

Oliver grunted, “I’m going to take a nap!” Then walked away.

“There’s a TV here, so we can watch Netflix!” Chloe screamed.

“First, we need to put food in the fridge,” Zack announced.

“Ok babe, I’ll help you!” Chloe called, following him.

“Well I guess I’ll start the TV by myself…” Olivia mumbled.

A few minutes later Olivia started hearing odd noises. At first she thought it was the air conditioner, but when the sounds got louder, she realized they were coming from the attic.

“Guys?” She called. I guess they can’t hear me, maybe I should go check it out, she thought to herself.

Just then Oliver entered the room, “Do you hear that sound?” He asked, “It woke me up.”

“Well duh!” Olivia joked. “It’s coming from the attic, will you go find a ladder..?”

“Only if you’re the one who climbs up there.” Oliver said, pivoting on his heel, he walks away.

“Fine,” Olivia grumbled angrily.

A few minutes later, Olivia was in the attic searching for anything out of the ordinary. “What’s that!?” She exclaimed, grabbing what looked like a book with a shiny padlock on it. “Guys! I found a book, I think it’s a diary!”

“Cool!” Zack said with anticipation.

“I’m coming down now, watch your heads!” Olivia announced, purposefully kicking Oliver.

“Hey!” He yelped, rubbing his forehead, “That was my head!”

“Well obviously!” Olivia laughed.

“Let’s take a selfie with it, hashtag old creepy diary!” Chloe smiled, snapping a picture, and posting it.

“I’m going to take a closer look at that diary.” Zack said, examining it cautiously. “That’s strange.” He said, lifting the padlock slightly. “Olivia, your name is engraved on the padlock.”

“What? ‘Olivia Johnson’” She read, “Oh my gosh, it is!” She marveled.

“Is it just me, “Oliver interjected, “or is that like…really strange.”

“It’s just a coincidence.” Olivia said.

“Whatever…” He mumbled back.

“Oh shut up!” Olivia snapped. “Since it has my name, I’m going to unlock it!”

“Woah.” Olivia gulped a few moments later when the padlock actually unlocked.

“What’s in it?” Zack asked.

“Well it seems like there are two entries.” Olivia stated. “This first one says, ‘Dear Diary, Today I arrived in Saint Lucia with my friends! I can’t wait to get ice cream and tan on the beach! It's going to be amazing!’. The second one says, ‘Dear Diary, we were supposed to go to the beach today, but it was raining too much, so we stayed here. Then, later in the day, a creepy man knocked at the door and wanted my diary. When I refused, he tried to hurt me. Thankfully, I kicked him and then Oliver hit him with a frying pan!’ That’s so weird. There are so many similarities between us and this diary,” Olivia concluded.

“We shouldn’t read into it too much. It’s getting late and I’m exhausted. Let’s just go to bed,” Zack yawned.