WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a poem about the sea that does not use the words

Deep,

Blue,

Shimmering,

Cold.

Synonyms and creativity will help you find ways to convey the enormousness and beauty of the ocean without using these common descriptors.

Final Fall

(TW: suicide)


A vast world –

Stretching before and below.

Unfathomable expanse

waiting in inky darkness

to welcome me.


Fear holds me fast.

Fear pushes me forward.

I adjust the bulk

surrounding my body –

the heft that will carry me

to my final fall.


Waves and rocking work in tandem

with my heartbeat –

here faster,

slower now.

I am already one with the sea.


Splash.


The frigid blanket embraces me.

Home.

At last

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