WRITING OBSTACLE

Choose one of your own writings, and critique it as if it were an award-winning novel or poem with outstanding reviews.

Try to shamelessly pick out positives that can be emphasised in a hyperbolic review-style summary. (Please do not review other people's work!)

Anxiety

My leg bounces

Because you didn’t say

Oh this sits taken

And I guess that’s okay

I just wish I wasn’t an easy replacement

That maybe since I started

To join the “trends”

Taht I’d be accepted

But I guess I was wrong

Cus in the end

I’m still moving seats

Because mine gets taken.

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