WRITING OBSTACLE
Inspired by Kendall Ripleys
A creature that has lived in a dark cave for its whole life experiences light for the first time.
Write a heavily descriptive piece about this experience.
WRITING OBSTACLE
Inspired by Kendall Ripleys
A creature that has lived in a dark cave for its whole life experiences light for the first time.
Write a heavily descriptive piece about this experience.
Love it 🥰 cicilious
This is a really nice idea and it seems like you’ve tried to develop some of the traits of the little creature so I felt happy for it when it got out! But there were so many spelling, grammar and sentence errors that really disturbed the tone and flow of the piece.
You could proof read your writing before posting, or even reading it out loud to yourself helps you spot mistakes - super easy to do and would immediately make it better! 😀