Elisekuu123
Hi, my name is Elise Moore- Arthur I want to improve my writing so please give feedback
Elisekuu123
Hi, my name is Elise Moore- Arthur I want to improve my writing so please give feedback
Hi, my name is Elise Moore- Arthur I want to improve my writing so please give feedback
Hi, my name is Elise Moore- Arthur I want to improve my writing so please give feedback
I wake up at the beginning of time I blink and squint then a see a vine The verdant diversity of trees it’s a vibe
I lift my head and see a the tranquil azure The twisted and twine branches I am as sure As I wish to have peace , some more
Ten I hear a loud piercing, sharp, scream Then I realise that this is all a dream
A creak and a crack a splint then a splash, went the creature lurking into through the empty darkness of the cave.This alien like creature, with fur as soft as a Pom Pom and eyes as big as the the sun. This creature Has no blood line to pass on and no friends to cherish; the no named creature paced around the perimeter of the cave. It was longer for more than a simple low level lifestyle and longing for happiness.
Year’s passed. Finally the brute piled up the little but apparent courage to live a new life knowing that every,tiny,little step cannot be taken back,thinking to his every so shrinking brain.Shall I step out of my world and enter a whole new one? He looked upon his shrivelled useless hands and also pondered another question why am I alive, just to suffer?
A couple more years gone by pacing around the cave. Suddenly, a shoot of light cracked in but only allowing a beam of light to enter, but how fascinating for him it was. Spending hours staring at this unfamiliar bean of light. Curiosity took over, and he followed this beam of light ; slowly but surely lead the beast to the exit. The unknown creature kicked the cave out of interest. Soon after, rocks came crashing down opening a heavenly, blinding, fascinating light as the sky was ablaze with the fire of the setting sun; the creature took a step towards his future.