Seasons Draft
I hold my breath
and look around.
Nature has sure
made it rounds.
Chilly winds
and chances of snow.
How beautiful is the
sky’s January glow.
Love in the air
and winds dialing down.
The beauty of February
will keep you in town.
March madness
is breaking out.
Soon saplings
Will start to sprout.
Spring-y clothes
and beautiful flowers.
Starting April
and the beginning of peaceful showers.
Last day of school
and almost time for summer.
May is a student’s favorite,
because it’s always funner.
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This is only 5/12 done, as you can tell. But, I wanted to share what I have for feedback purposes. I do want to end the poem with “And, yet, I saw the whole thing” which I’m using as I saw every part of the year.
The grammar in that author’s note was . . .